ESL COMPOSITION PROFILE
 
Student: Date: Topic:

 
SCORE RANGE CONTENT CRITERIA COMMENTS
30-27 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD: knowledgeable • substantive • thorough development of thesis • relevant to assigned topic
26-22 GOOD TO AVERAGE: some knowledge of subject • adequate range • limited development of thesis • mostly relevant to topic, but lacks detail 
21-17 FAIR TO POOR: limited knowledge of subject • little substance • inadequate development of topic
16-13 VERY POOR: does not show knowledge of subject • non-substantive • not pertinent • OR not enough to evaluate 

 
 
SCORE RANGE ORGANIZATION CRITERIA COMMENTS
20-18 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD: fluent expression • ideas clearly stated/ supported • succinct • well-organized • logical sequencing • cohesive
17-14 GOOD TO AVERAGE: somewhat choppy • loosely organized but main ideas stand out • limited support • logical but incomplete sequencing
13-10 FAIR TO POOR: non-fluent • ideas confused or disconnected • lacks logical sequencing and development
9-7 VERY POOR: does not communicate • no organization • OR not enough to evaluate
 
SCORE RANGE VOCABULARY CRITERIA COMMENTS
20-18 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD: sophisticated range • effective word/idiom choice and usage • word form mastery • appropriate register
17-14 GOOD TO AVERAGE: adequate range • occasional errors of word/idiom form, choice, usage but meaning not obscured
13-10  FAIR TO POOR: limited range • frequent errors of word/idiom form, choice, usage • meaning confused or obscured
9-7 VERY POOR: essentially translation • little knowledge of English vocabulary, idioms, word form • OR not enough to evaluate

 
 
SCORE RANGE LANGUAGE USE CRITERIA COMMENTS
25-22 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD: effective complex constructions • few errors of agreement, tense, number, word order/function, articles, pronouns, prepositions
21-18 GOOD TO AVERAGE: effective but simple constructions • minor problems in complex constructions • several errors of agreement, tense, number, word order/function, articles, pronouns, prepositions but meaning seldom obscured
17-11 FAIR TO POOR: major problems in simple/complex constructions • frequent errors of negation, agreement, tense, number, word order/function, articles,pronouns, prepositions and/or fragments, run-ons, deletions • meaning confused or obscured
10-5 VERY POOR: virtually no mastery of sentence construction rules • dominated by errors • does not communicate • OR not enough to evaluate
 
SCORE RANGE MECHANICS CRITERIA COMMENTS
5 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD: demonstrates mastery of conventions • few errors of spelling, punctuation, capitalization, paragraphing 
4 GOOD TO AVERAGE: occasional errors of spelling, punctuation, capitalization, paragraphing but meaning not obscured 
3 FAIR TO POOR: frequent errors of spelling, punctuation, capitalization, paragraphing • poor handwriting • meaning confused or obscured 
2 VERY POOR: no mastery of conventions • dominated by errors of spelling, punctuation, capitalization, paragraphing • handwriting illegible • OR not enough to evaluate

 
 
 
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